Is my story good enough to be published?? Twihards have to cheak this out!?

It is not close to being ready for publishing. Everyone that said you are good is right. But good for a 14 year old not near good enough for an adult writer. You have to be better then adult writers. Also this is more of raw talent then anything. It shows potential but it is obvious you are trying to hard to ge the words across. Keep trying and I pray to god this has original quality because this is going to be compared to Twilight. I'm assuming you like Twilight but your manuscript being compared to a best seller of the same genre all the time isn't good.